Unforgiven

by Independence Forever   Mar 17, 2007


Am i unforgiving for what i did?
even though i was just a kid?

the man's neck snapped like a pencil
i wish i were like normal kids, using stencils

tell me what I've done
I'm in jail just for one

what if i fight? if i brawl? what then?
i can't tell, why am i tried like men?

this blood is on my hands, and i can't get it off
i feel so sick in here, all i do now is cough

comfort me with your soothing words
your voice to me is like singing birds

stand beside me, i feel trapped in here
why can't you illuminate me with your sphere?

i am not different from you, just locked
but you treat me like an animal, blocked

lay beside me, this won't hurt you, trust me
it is from my eyes that you should truly see

sick and tired, I'm tired of this rough treatment dear
since i came in here, the only feeling i knew is fear

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  • 17 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    I say, that was one of your best david, I really liked the emotion and pain, I almost cried. (We're all trapped dogs)

    -Liz-
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    This is a good poem another interesting topic, keep at it,
    nessa