Living Never

by Annabel   Mar 18, 2007


Crying murmurs,
Trembling sighs,
Desperate voices,
Crashing around.

Deathly quiet,
Smashes serenity,
Tinkling notes
Miss their queue.

Disaster unfolds
Captured in the moment.
Escaping unthinkable,

Living never.

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  • 18 years ago

    by NeferNoir

    Short and sorrowful...
    Really good! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Boy

    Awwwwwwwww. very deeply written i loved it

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Oh wow. I loved this poem. It was just so dark and full of emotion. It left a shiver up my spine =P

    The thing that really caught my eye was your use of words. The stanzas were beautifully written, with great emotion. I don't know what else to say, but that this poem is simply gorgeous. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Dee

    Very good! i liked your choice of words

  • 18 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Ohh, I liked this. Very short, but extremely detailed. So much imagery was expressed throughout those short lines.

    Nice work. 5/5.

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