When you* left me Here....

by amber   Mar 19, 2007


Timeless memories keep coming back
I still think you are there
It's been a year since you left
Why should i still care?

A memorable pain i can't forget
It hurts worse now than before
Why i still feel this way
My mind still isn't sure

I can still feel your breath upon me
Sending chills down my spine
Holding my body close to yours
As if for the last time

I can still feel those eyes stare
Deep into my soul
Afraid if the contact breaks
I might let you go

I can still feel those fingertips
That caressed my every curve
Making me feel like the woman i was
Making me feel i had worth

I can still feel our lips on mine
Kissing me with every emotion
Your eyes were pools of the deepest blue
Your love held such devotion

I often wonder, if you too
Feel the same as I
Do you ever think of me,
has my memory died?

If you have, I'm glad to know
You knew the love you lost
You're hearts become the black hole
Covered with bitter frost.

I might have dreams at night
And memories to clog my mind
My mind might wonder back again
To the love, once upon a time

But never have I regretted it
My decision was nothing but true
Although the sweetest memories i have
Are the times i spent with you

My heart might break, my eyes might cry
Down my cheek will fall a tear
But the sweetest memory I'll ever have
Was when you left me here.

by: amber
please critique and tell me what can be changed,
the 1st to many in a long time :D
thanks for takin the time to read this

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  • 16 years ago

    by crissy

    I like it, a person can really relate to it. an it's deep, u did a great job, keep it up