Eternally In Love With You

by Jessica   Mar 24, 2007


Engulfing feelings held safely within
Rapid heart palpitations revealing all fears
Shimmering sweat glowing upon supple skin
Swiftly the emotion she dreads firmly appears..

Fading minds cling to each blissful thought
Tender lips yearn for a lover`s delicate caress
Crippling a heart in effort; her love she fought
Each piece of a broken soul, left weeping in distress..

Racing pulses capture veins, desire tingles on skin
Nervous smiles flutter on lips; a glance she must pursue
Longing rushes over souls; every second between like a sin
Sealed with a kiss; she realizes she`s eternally in love with you..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    Awhh this was so sweet<3 it was an amazing poem. and i can relate to it because i felt this way about a guy. actually,i still do. but anyways wonderful poem. 5/5 never stop writing!!

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    That was a beautiful poem! You've got great talent. The rhythem of the poem was flawless and your choice of words was perfect. Keep it up! God Bless 5/5
    <3Tayyy

  • 17 years ago

    by Hey Brittknee

    Wow i loved this one, this one is my favorite of the 3 i read

    favorite line:
    Shimmering sweat glowing upon supple skin

    brittany (MD)

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    I don't understand why this isn't a 5.0 ... Downvoters suck. Anyways .. You did an excellent job! For only 14 you write beautifully. Again your vocab.. it's simply amazing. I liked how you put palpitations in here I never thought to see that in poetry. You did an amazing job babe I loved it! Your rhyming was perfect and you flow was too. I really loved this part:

    Fading minds cling to each blissful thought
    Tender lips yearn for a lover`s delicate caress
    Crippling a heart in effort; her love she fought
    Each piece of a broken soul, left weeping in distress..

    Amazing Job!

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jason Rainey

    Thats mighty deep of you! The title captures the essence of the meaning and the content is very embracing of the topic at hand. I really like this one.