Forshadowing a life

by cowgirlstar26   Mar 29, 2007


An opaque room silent
no hidden voice to be heard
murmurs and whispers
but no concrete words

fears grow stronger
as my heart fades
deafening screams
as I lay here and wait

twilight pierces the sky
fleecy clouds cast shadows
the wind hushes me to sleep
curled up against my window

sleepless nights
and fear filled dreams
one day I'll overcome ...
No more haunting memories

everything has vanished
waking to a transparent world
tapering clouds brood down
foreshadowing this lifeless girl

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  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous

    I like it! i hope you overcome this demon! (not real demon, but you know). Reminds me of autumn nights with a half moon and leaves blowing around everywhere. great imagery.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fr0g PrincE

    Beautiful piece... we almost have the same type of imagery... but for me You're the WINNER.. yeah.. keep up the Good work!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    Buetifully written i especially like the 3rd stanza....5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by bon

    Good use of vocab and a srtong poem with a nice flow. I thought it was good that the flow was the way it is, although it could have been better, it allowed the meaning to come out more. Great job. =D

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Poeta

    How beautiful. The imagery was unbelievable; you're such an amazing writer. You really brought this poem to life with great word choice and flow. 5/5

    Heartz!

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