Screaming Angels [Parquette]

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Mar 29, 2007


A silver blade strikes fresh skin -
As screaming Angels watch in despair from the sky,
Laughing as death creeps through their crooked veins,
With scarlet blood dried onto their ashen chins.

A silver blade strikes fresh skin -
Silence shattered from a sorrowful good-bye,
Broken wings trapped in jagged rusty chains;
As faded stars whisper a hoarse lullaby.

A silver blade strikes fresh skin -
Candy coated with powder white cocaine,
But hush my little Darling, don't you cry;
Swallow down your pride and ignore the pain.

A silver blade strikes fresh skin -
Horror clouds in the Angel's charcoal eyes,
As they watch with agonizing disdain,
The beating of another naive heart slain.

-Jenna Elphick
March 28, 2007.

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It has four stanzas, each containing four lines.The first line of the poem is repeated in every stanza as the first line. Each line except the first has 10-12 syllables. The rhyme scheme is "abcaabcbacbcabcc"

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  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    OMG! thats awesome!...ive done a parquette before it was crap...you seemed to pull this one of extremely well...

    I dont know why but this line struck a chord with me

    Broken wings trapped in jagged rusty chains

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Oh!Emm!Gee! I could NEVER write like you do. You write with such words and you capture the reader into a time frame, however brief, and they go away with a residual (sp?) effect of the poem still lingering in their mind. You use such vivid and fantastic words and the flow and rhymes are always amazing! I don't read a lot of work that meets the standards that you have ((effortlessly, might I add)) set. I love it! As always, 5/5 and GREAT JOB!!

    Toodles Darling!
    Ciao

  • 17 years ago

    by broken reflection

    Stunningly deep, meaning goes far 5/5 keep up the intense poems

  • 17 years ago

    by StarLightxInHisEyes

    Wow...that's dark. I can just imagine the skin splitting-*Sar K*