Fire in the head [Tyburn]

by Infected with His Deadly Love   Apr 3, 2007


Burning
Dreaming
Fighting
Screaming
Fire in my head burning, I'm dreaming
I am now fighting and I'm screaming

Tyburn

A six line poem consisting of 2, 2, 2, 2, 9, 9 syllables.

The first four lines rhyme and are all descriptive words. The last two lines rhyme and incorporate
the first, second, third, and fourth lines as the 5th through 8th syllables.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I've never heard of this style of writing before so it was good to see a new style. I liked this poem great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Very creative!
    I've never read one of these
    before. Pretty neat.
    Keep up the great work!
    God Bless 5/5
    <3Tayyy

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    I liked the feeling though it's so short..and i liked the formar..i will sometime try it
    Good job
    Take care
    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Comment #4

    The last line was off a little bit on the syllable count but i know how hard this are.
    I had to do a double tyburn for a challenge and man, are they difficult!!
    lol
    A good attempt though
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by lost and incomplete

    Beautifull dark chilling....FeEl LiKe GiViNg Up

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