Pygmy Wings {{tanka}}

I love Tanka's! Yay!

Anyways.
I liked this one; it said a lot for me in just a few stanzas. Bright and well written.
And I adore the ending line; it made the poem what it is.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

You're really good at writing different types of poetry :) I enjoyed reading all of your poems, keep up the good work

5/5!

This was a unique piece which I found to be quite creative to tell you the truth. The style you picked to write this in was really well suited and nothing seemed to be out of place what so ever. Well done~mel

OoOoO!!
very nicely done!
I loved it!
great vocab!

Nice idea. I think it could've been longer, you could've done a second tanka, but considering the small amout of space you had to work with, you did great.