Sigh

by RainbowSlider   Apr 7, 2007


Can she cheer me up when I am down?
Can she be my best friend all around?
Can she look closer to what's inside?
Can she converse and overlook my pride?
Can she dance and make me feel happy?
Can she love me even when I'm crappy?
Can she sing to me and hold me close?
Can she laugh when she makes a pose?
Can she giggle and tickle my nose?
Can she survive in a barren place?
Can she caress my mind and face?
Can she make a house into a home?
Can she make me not want to roam?
Can she dance to a different drummer?
Can she or can't?; Oh, what a bummer.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Isabella

    The repetition creat an amaxing mantra and make the poem a little more unique then it else would have been.

  • 17 years ago

    by lost and incomplete

    Magnifcently written well worded poem, the flow was smooth, stayed on track, all in all i thought it was a great read, keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Well this poem was excellent. the ending. sigh, was amazing!

    5/5 david

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