Love talk (When love consumed me)

by isabel   Apr 9, 2007


Two years have gone away
My heart's filled with a childish emotion
Nowhere is where I want to stay
Of the danger I have no notion

Forget love, grow up
You are dying in the dark
Now, you need to stand up
And fight against your broken heart

Life is only one day long
Don't you wish to try everything?
Life is just like a song
And now is your turn to sing

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  • 18 years ago

    by PoeticJustice

    Nowhere is where I want to stay
    Of the danger I have no notion

    ^^I completely agree with you. great poem. thanks for the comments. u should post your portugues ones too.

  • 18 years ago

    by becca

    This is amazing! it relates so well to me, and you use of words and style are so beautiful. a beautiful poem and you must be an amazing english speaker to write such a lovely and meaningful poem. definately keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Luis Sousa

    Why to suffer in silence,
    when you can scream?
    why to speak alone,
    when you can scream?
    why to shut up in the dark,
    when you can scream?

    SCREAM!! LOUD!! LOUD ENOUGH FOR THE PEOPLE IN THE CONCRETE JUNGLE TO HEAR YOU!! SCREAM!! AND SEND YOUR SUFFERING INTO A POEM!! SCREAM!! AN LIVE LIFE WITHOUT REGRET!! SCREAM!! AND SEND THE GHOSTS OF A LIFETIME INTO FORGETNESS!! SCREAM!! REBELL AGAINST YOURSELF AND WIN THE BATTLE OF LIFE!!
    SCREAM!! AND LIVE!! SCREAM!! JUST SCREAM!!

  • 18 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Beautifully written! i love it especially the last part!

    xo kisses xo

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