Praying for peace

by Mommy And Me   Apr 11, 2007


Falling she sees
those of her past and present
praying she wishes for her future
to awaken her in the morning light

Falling she senses
a child's tears of the unknown
and the screams of the hatred
to slash into her soul

Falling she caress
the hearts within hers
kisses her fatal fears
and allows a droplet to fall

Flying she sees
everything around her
the pain and the suffering
with the sadness in their eyes

But she also sees
the weight of the world
spread within the love
that they share for each other

and as she flys off she prays
for thier hearts to be healed
and thier wishes to be answered
by the one she's off to meet.

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  • 13 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Hun, you need to either capitalize all of the lines, or don't capitalize any..well, you don't HAVE to..but it looks much neater and more oganized if you do. Another thing, some grammar could really bring this piece out..."Falling she caress" Caress to caresses? ...

    "and as she flys off she prays
    for thier hearts to be healed
    and thier wishes to be answered"

    Flys to flies. Thier to their, in both lines.

    Again, this one has potential as well..it holds a lot of meaning and emotion in it. =)

  • 14 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Amazing! You keep suprising me with your work. You rarely rhyme and it's great the way you write! I love your style and your words! Great job!!
    5/5
    heartcha..< 3
    Ciao~

  • 14 years ago

    by tyanna

    This is a wonderfully written poem!! It brought a tear to my eye!!!