Reverse this curse [Tetractys]

by Infected with His Deadly Love   Apr 15, 2007


For
Me too
Love again, I'll
Reverse this curse
That you have cast upon my haunted soul

Tetractys, consists of at least 5 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 10
syllables (total of 20).

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lonesomeme

    Wow...great job, I have never seen this type of poem before but i think it is very interesting. Great job -unattractive1

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    I don't tend to like poems formatted like this.. However, it was strangely attractive as a piece of writing, and the words were formed perfectly. A great write.

    Sole. x

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    I always like to read this poems.
    The creative techniques. The
    same 'ol abcb, or abab ect...
    it gets tiering. Wonderful!
    God Bless 5/5
    <3Tayy
    ^_^ily

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    I have yet to try this style and you've made it look so effortless and simple but i know staying to a fixed syllable count is hard =)
    Great job
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I haven't seen this style before, but I think you did a great job with it.
    Though shourt it really stands out to the reader, and I loved the ending, I thought it was a great way to wrap up.

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