I Got Trouble

by Tricky Daze   Apr 19, 2007


Looking across the room seeking
For your hands to make me dreaming
Gained your love in this time maybe
But got trouble by loving you babe

When your tender skin brings all time
To anywhere that there is no crime
You need all these fuzzy chaos maybe
But got trouble by loving you babe

Gazing to the guns you carry with you
Feeling so insecure that I'm your boo
I will wait when you go away maybe
But got trouble by loving you babe

Wasn't aware of the enemies you have
Or the blackmails that inside they rave
You will go beat them and relax maybe
But got trouble by loving you babe

Feeling the coldness on my neck of a knife
It's so hard to be a known Mafia's wife
Not the first time I feel that fear maybe
But got trouble by loving you babe

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  • 18 years ago

    by bubbles2424

    Another awsome poem
    You're an amazing writer...you've got SO MUCH talent..im really impressed with alot of these!

    <3 katie

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Hmm, some of your rhymes sound really forced. The flow was a bit off because of that.
    Just to let you know.. 'maybe' and 'babe' doesn't rhyme at all. 'Maybe' and 'baby' would be the words that rhyme.

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, another great one, very greatly written.you are a great writer and your poems are all great.
    keep it up. another 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nick who Plays Pool

    Well done, very nice new poem. It was well written and organized and is very deep. I like how you repeated the last line in each stanza, well done.
    ~5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Startle Me

    This is kind of confusing.
    I read it more than once
    And it still was.
    Maybe you could straighten it up a bit?
    But are you trying to say
    Baby?
    Or was it really
    Babe?

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