My Pathetic Song

by Dead Inside   Apr 20, 2007


Pain
searing through all my brain.
Vein,
flowing with pure dismay.
Hate,
from people who gave me life.
Fate,
that pulled me away from light.
Luck,
it left as fast as it came.
Fu#$,
everything that drives me insane.
Love,
you awoke inside of me.
Sucks,
that it may never be.
Sorrow,
drowning my very soul.
Borrowed,
things to fill this hole.
Tears,
my friends on lonely nights.
Fear,
of all those ruthless fights.
Mend,
everything thats torn apart.
End,
my pathetic song.

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  • 16 years ago

    by K3LSI3

    I thought this poem was really good.Keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by LifeThroughMyEyes

    Thats really cool. what is that form called?!

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Unique write. I loved it it left me breathless each time i finished a line. One of my personal favorites.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Angelena Branch

    I can tell that you are hurt and I can see the pain in it all very good 5/5