Dreams of Bittersweet

That was so nice,
really good job
loved itXxX

Vow of truth-hidden in the lies
I stand among the shade--beautiful shade;
How many can touch the falls of truth?

^^ Sometimes the underlyin truth that we talk about are only in the human imagination...

Society I call mine will always falter behind--
The patriarch!

^^ Im not sure if that" society" u are referrin here is your beliefs, if so, As i told you before I admire you for who and what you are..

Bitter is the dream--below, sweet dream--above
Enmeshed in all the truths and lies
Wash away the crisp autumn leaves of summer;
Love is the only truth I worship.

^^I never believed the fairy tale ending. But I do believe in whole, true love and people who find it are lucky. Those who dont blame the world.

To sum it up, Ur poem is indeed superb and i had to read it few times to finally emerged with this conclusions..hahaha...Its coz your vocab was extensively classy..hahaha..

Cuutee.
i like it, you use really deep words.

Umm.. yeah... well its ok I guess... for such a pompous poo head. ;)

haha.

ALRIIIIIGHT! Its good. Thats about as much of a compliment you'll get from me so enjoy it while it lasts! :)

"Wash away the crisp autumn leaves of summer;
Love is the only truth I worship."

Brilliant. An absolutely vivid and beautifully penned piece, Noir. The way in which you apply imagery to this piece proves you are able to manage this poetic tool with ease and supplement your words with such solid and profound meaning. A wonderfully expressed piece, my friend; well done :).