Runaway From The Pain

by Tricky Daze   Apr 23, 2007


Deeply waiting for the perfect day
To find my solution or define my way
Walls are too thick that nobody can hear
My screams that I will tell I have to runaway

Quietly thinking about words I will say
To be all on minds or the sins i will pay
Faces are jealous that nobody will understand
My feelings that I have to tell I have to runaway

Sadly telling goodbye sorry I won't stay
To endure my pain or secrets I will betray
Happiness isn't my thing that there is now just
My tombstone that I had to tell I had to runaway

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  • 16 years ago

    by Simply Josh

    Beautifully written and running away from things is one of the easiest solutions in solving problems. However we all have to face it now and then. Good luck with that. Keep up the great work. :)
    cheers, josh

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    This was a much better poem than your last, and the ratings should be switched. This poem had a much better flow, and the lines were so much easier to read. Good job on this poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Seronum

    I really like this poem, its got a deeper meaning i believe. 5/5 Keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetic Grunt

    Well its pretty good to be honest though
    I would have rhymed runaway with different things like
    end of the day
    It will al be ok once I
    stuff like that but i have a unique style i guess?

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Oh god, a very greatly written great poem,
    very deep and perfectly written. you are such a great writer.
    keep it up
    a 5/5 from me cause you really deserve it.

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