Hope

by ben thompson   Apr 26, 2007


A little longer I must hold on and wish alive my dying dreams.
Keep up appearances, grit my teeth, while I fall apart at the seams.

Embody the lone wolf, master of solitude, running against the wind.
Convince myself I'm hardened steel of which no man can bend.

Dance through darkness and searing pain, bringing most men to their knees.
Smile in contentment while I'm beaten, lying calmly as I bleed.

A little longer I must fight to survive, and defend the ones I love.
Praying to the savior when I die to take my soul up above.

Much has been taken from me, but never what I hold most dear.
And that thing is my hope, God gave me to erase all my fears.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Much has been taken from me, but never what I hold most dear.
    And that thing is my hope, God gave me to erase all my fears.
    ^^^
    What beautiful ending lines!
    Touching write Ben ....

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Knowing all that you have bben through the past few years, I can say that you should be very proud of yourself and I am glad you haven't lost hope. The poem is deep and straight from your heart.

  • 18 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Much has been taken from me, but never what I hold most dear.
    And that thing is my hope, God gave me to erase all my fears.

    Very deep and touching....well done...

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    You are so right here and i really wish that God give you strength to always hang on that little Hope of yours. There is no life without Hope.

    very nicely written

    Dance through darkness and searing pain, bringing most men to their knees.
    Smile in contentment while I'm beaten, lying calmly as I bleed

    beautiful indeed

    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    Ben
    What a wonderful poem. Full of so much emotion.

    Much has been taken from me, but never what I hold most dear.
    And that thing is my hope, God gave me to erase all my fears.

    I love your ending lines.
    Take Care Love Cindy

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