Everything

Hmmm i like this one better than the last one i read of yours, flows much better. great work

I really liked this one too. I think almost every girl can relate to this... 5/5

Ravyn

Another great love poem (even though its sad love). It had a nice flow and I could feel the emotions it contained. Never stop writing. *5/5*

Alyson

This is quite good. I would think though instead of saying I say bye it should be I say goodbye, just kind of sounds better, at least I think so anyway, otherwise it's very good and I like it.

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

I thought it was kind of sad but also a very nice poem, i liked to see the way you pulled it all together, 5/5