Another poem about him

by ImNotPerfect20   Jul 11, 2007


I recognize I am depressed.
I know it is crazy.
I can't help what I feel
Because he made me dizy

Yes I am talking about him
He was my everything
I struggle not to think of him
I strive not to dream of him

Just what I feel is real
He was my everything.
Why can't I get over him?
Tell me why this is so real.

Another poem about him
Another wasted moment
Don't tell me I am crazy
Please tell me I am normal

Can't help the way I feel
Just want to make it stop
My heart can't take anymore
Because he is gone and never,
Going to come back.

This is my way of healing
So don't tell me I am cliche
I know that's what you think
But if it works then leave me alone

I am done with this poem now
Just wanted to release my feelings
don't read it if you don't want to
Since I can really care less.

Note: At the end I tell you not to read it if you dont want to.. I am refering to my other poems.. I have had a lot of "Oh your poems are to Cliche" or "You have to many Grammer errors" that is why I wrote this the way i did..

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  • 11 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Excellent poem...

  • 11 years ago

    by OHgreenman

    A piece full of honest emotions and put together well...sometimes you have to just write for you and release what dwells within...beautifully written and pieced together well...

  • 11 years ago

    by JaMeS

    Lol i hate it when people are like you didnt use full stops and commas and that its a poem on a website! its not a letter to the president of the world lol well i like it and the careless attitude :)

  • 11 years ago

    by jenna grace

    I can relate alot to it. yooh can feel the emotion yooh put into the piece. well done. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I do like to read freee verse poems that just express honest emotion that flow straight from the heart. This poem reflects on the passion that drives us crazy,while addressing its readers to tell it like it is.

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