Breaking Point

by Jessica   Apr 29, 2007


This is just venting, so please do excuse me if it's terrible. =]

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Why are we doing this?
Can't you see the way I feel?
My emotions are at breaking point,
My heart is delicate and perplexed.

My stomach flips when I see you,
My insides melt at the sound of your voice,
My mouth pouts when close to yours,
My conscience will take no part in this.

The feelings that flow through me,
Block all thoughts; block my guilt.
I love her, but I love you more.
I can't help the way I feel about you.

Don't punish me for this love,
My feelings for you will not go away.
My guilt can be put aside, but love?
I will be reminded of you every day..

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  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I love this. A little confusing at times but nothing too bad. Very bittersweet.

    5.5
    :]

  • 18 years ago

    by Rasheed Khokhar

    Really so beautyful with sweet emotions..... Really i enjoyed. GOOD....:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Boy

    Don't punish me for this love,
    My feelings for you will not go away

    aaah i loved these lines allot. the poems was realy well written. thefeelings and emotions were strong. it make me awesome.
    i will must give you 5/5

    take care
    your friend

  • 18 years ago

    by Fsams

    Dear its not terrible its so simple and conveying the intended meaning. Thank you for adding my poem to your favourites. tc

  • 18 years ago

    by tyanna

    Pretty good..the ending seemed to come to quick and not really "end" the poem...You know what I mean?? You did paint a picture in my mind with this one though..4/5

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