by Startle Me Apr 29, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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Blood veins and locked chains |
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"Yet if it is the battle that you win |
by rene
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You never cease to amaze me huh. just another great poem. you are truly a great poet, hope to read more. |
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I like the "storyline" behind this poem. It seems like a little bit of forced rhyming is being used in a few places, so work on that, but other than that it was excellent. |
by Aure
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Great poem, indeed a bit story like but it's something different for a change, it showed emotion and mystery, something everyone longs to |
by carissalynn
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Wonderful story like lol, flowed from within, [= very well written! |