Ninety Days
by Marc Ortiz May 1, 2007
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Its been more than three months.. Three lonely months |
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16 years ago
by Hebe
A very strong poem.
Very emotional, very sad..
Love can bring lots of happyness, but on the other side, it can hurt like hell..
Hope you will be oke..
You did a great job on this one.
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16 years ago
by Birgit
You are truly talented ^_^
I like the repitition of "Ninety days had passed since our great divide" This sentence is just so strong, and you can feel that it's hard for you to go on.. you can feel your emotion in that line... and in the rest from the poem! =) Good job again Marc =]<3
5/5
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16 years ago
I got butterflys just like I CoZ This Pain did! Realy deep Marc
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16 years ago
This poem makes me want to cry because that is exactly how i felt when my ex broke up with me!! I felt like every day was just draggin on and on and it was just never ending pain..you just took the feeling out of my heart and wrote them down with beautiful words! 5/5
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16 years ago
by Vanessa
Sad heartfelt, and excellently penned. that was amazing. I like this one the best so far. the word choice was strong like the emtion, and the flow was great. no crtisim here. I think this one is perfect 5/5
