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by Infected with His Deadly Love   May 3, 2007


She sits by the phone
And waits for the call
She is trembling all over
If she stood, she would fall

He said he would call
So she knew he will be Okay
So she waits all night
By the phone, she will stay

As the morning sun rises
She starts to worry
For she has no news
About the boy, she wants to marry

She tries to call his phone
But he doesn't answer
She is having a panic attack
For she thinks he needs her

Her door bell rings
And she see's its the cops
She knows something has happened
They start to fall, her teardrops

They say there was an accident
And that he is dead
She would have to see his corpse
And this is she what she will dread

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  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    That was sad. Some of the rhymes seemed a little forced, but the emtion was clear and strong. The word choice was good, but a few words could have been changed to deliver more power. All in all a great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    The vocabulary in this is perfecto.
    Although the poem seemed story like.
    It was just average.
    The story was fantastic, though.
    It was very creative. 5/5 :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Allison

    This is a great poem about something that no one wants to go through. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

    ♥ Alyson ♥

  • 17 years ago

    by sOmEbOdYsNoBoDy

    Oh my googdness i got the chills while rading this i hope that didnt happen to you if it did im realy sorry

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    That made me want to cry...
    I couldn't help imagining myself in that situation because the words seemed so real...
    Such a heartbreaking poem..
    5/5
    *Gem*

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