As Cold As You.

by Teria   May 3, 2007


As cold as you.

Dreary thoughts tremble
through-out my mind.
Surely, this is not
what you'll find.
You're searching
inside of me,
for the things that
resemble you.

The heart so cold,
empty, yet wet.
The soul so dry,
filled with anger inside.
The eyes causing pain,
from all the stare downs.
The piece broken off,
cutting others wrists.

Seldom do you see,
the things inside of me.
That remind me of you,
and all your stupid ways.
But, every now and then..
There's something deep inside.
That triggers my mind
to be as cold as you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by XxMoonLightxX

    Very very very good...another fav of mine!...great flow..nice use of rhythem

    loved everything about it

    5/5
    nice job again!
    love,
    ~Shannon~

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelsea

    I like this one, although it is a bit short (not that I'm really one to talk about short poems...haha) The wording is really nice. Good job :]

  • 16 years ago

    by SacredCore

    Yet a good job:)..am impressed..

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    "But, every now and then..
    There's something deep inside.
    That triggers my mind
    to be as cold as you."

    That ending stanza sent chills down my spine.
    The mind is a very complex machine and sometimes it seems to do things beyond our control, anad against our will.
    I love how you used the trigger metaphor
    Powerful piece!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by Kurt

    This was a powerful write. You are a flippin machine tonight. I've loved both new poems you wrote and I'm sure I'll love the other two as well. Keep up the amazing work.

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