Eye of the Beholder

by ShootingStar179   May 3, 2007


An old man sat on a bench one fine spring day,
He smiled at a young woman next and said,
I have a story, my dear, and it is headed your way

There once was a beautiful girl,
Her heart was filled with compassion,
That sweet voice could make your toes curl,

It is said that beauty is in the eye of the beholder,
But if you needed someone to listen and cry to,
She always offered a silent, unjudging shoulder

Until one day, she met a boy,
His eyes were downcast, and he seemed quite down,
As much as she wanted to smile,
All she could offer was a frown

He asked, Oh dear what is wrong?
She was always smiling,
Like magic, that was gone.

The girl replied with tears rolling down an angel's cheek,
I am sorry to say that my facade has cracked,
I hate myself for it but my small life,
My whole existence is just an act

All were shocked at such a revelation that she had lied,
To every single soul she had touched in her life,
Sunshine disappeared and that was the day beauty died

With her bright makeup smeared,
And a dull face of dismay,
No one looked her way or even smiled,
For lying, they thought that she should pay.

The woman on the bench that fine, spring day cried,
What a horrible thing for friends to do!
To say that poor girl should be denied!

But you see that doesn't matter, the old man explained,
That young girl, now my wife, will always be beautiful to me,
She was bonded down with chains of lies,
Now as we are in love, my dear, she is free.

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  • 16 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Wow...that poem is totally awesome. It just goes to show you that even if someone appears to be perfect, they themselves have troubles and can't bear the weight of the world on their own. Beautifully written. 5/5 for sure

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    "I have a story, my dear, and it is headed your way" this line should be in quotes and have a period at the end of the line.

    I really liked the poem but the fact that the stanzas vary from four lines and three lines it keeps it fresh however I dont really like how it stays the same for two verses kind of throws it off. Wow such a sweet ending.. I loved it.. its true love sees nothing like that it only feels. Wonderful ending, at first I thought it was going to be sad and you had it in the wrong category but now I see that it couldn't have fit better. I loved the ending and the title was a perfect fit. Nice work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracie

    Omg i love it!!!!!!!!
    i really really do!!!

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