Incredible Value Price.

by Teria   May 4, 2007


Incredible Value Price.

The edges go in a bit too far,
the top comes out way too much.
It's over sized, not worth the price.
It's cracked here and there; what a piece of art.
It has a line down the center showing that
t's easily broken.
Four shades too bright, still not beating.
It gave up on itself not long ago.

This is an incredible value price
for a worn down heart.
I'll give it to you half off
it's yours for the taking.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Short and sweet with nice wordings and a beautiful flow. I like the way you have written it. Very well penned. Tc

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Aw beautiful poem! I enjoyed reading this! good flow! great structure! kepe it up! 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Hey!!...Beautiful poem!!...i thpough i found it hard to comprehend the whole idea 2wrds the start..i liked the way it progressed....luve it!!...Good write!

  • 16 years ago

    by Synh

    What an awesome twist. I wasnt expecting it be about something like that. Really cool how you manipulated the words into some sort commercial thing. I loved it, honestly. It sounded so heart broken and cold but beautiful nonetheless. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    That was a good poem, and I would agree that it was fun to read. It was a really well written poem, the flow was good, well penned.5/5

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