Be My Escape

I like the idea of this poem a lot.. although its been done before.. the flow was great except for in this line "This is a call for help, an appeal" which created an ejoyable read.. the word choice was good.. not fantastic i think you could have described your feelings with a little more detial.. but its just an opinion :D

And again! another beautiful poem! good choice of words! the flow was flawless! beautifully penned! The emotions was raw. Well done! 5/5 as always :)

Very sad ad heart touching write. The sadness can be felt in the words you have penned.

Will someone be able to change
These emotions, feelings I feel?
It hurts my heart, hurts my soul
This is a call for help, an appeal

Searching for a knight in armor
It doesn't matter the size, shape
Save me from thoughts, pessimism
Say nothing at all, just be my escape

These two stanzas say so much. Great job!
Take Care Cindy

Loved this part

Depression we will feel once again
Out comes the body's glorious rain

And that's all I have to say. =)

Good job!

This one is soooo neat i love reading ur poems great job hun!