Between Two

by ImNotPerfect20   May 7, 2007


I am lost between two
Just dont know what to do.
My ex is confusing.
But so is my other crush.

Every time Im almost over him
He talks to me again
Its just not working, he has her.
He loves her and not me.

My crush is way to shy.
Just dont know what to do.
Cant handle this right now
Im going to tell him why

They both are stressing me out
Why cant my life be perfect?
Without them bothering me.
I loved them both but not now

Cant understand whats wrong
Just dont know what to do
They dont talk to me long
Because Im not that girl.

Note: I tired something different here.. if you notice each stanza has a different amount of silibles.. the first has 6 the next 7 and so on like that.. i hope you guys like it.

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  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    Yeah this poems really choppy, but i like the format (the whole syllable thing) i have a really hard time sticking to most structures, especially complicated ones. cool poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by BreeAnna

    Life is not perfect. no one's is... no matter how much we fabricate things. one day you will find a guy that loves you for you no matter what kind of girl you are... something a friend told me.. you need to love yourself before you can love someone else. I am not saying that you dont.. just wanted to share that with you. hope things work out. great work.
    Bree

  • 16 years ago

    by Allison

    Wonderful read dear! I've felt like the girl in the poem and its no fun. Keep writing. *5/5*

    Alyson

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I like that you tried something different, it's evident that you tried hard with this piece, and I like that. I don't know why, but for me it doesn't seem to read like a poem. I think the flow could maybe have been a little better? But overall, it was well written.

    Nice try. :]

  • 16 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    This is one of your better ones I have to say. I really like this one. Great job. Flow is overall much better and word choice is good. 5/5!

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

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