One Last Poem for the Rhyming Age

by LadyPearl   May 12, 2007


Eyes weary and blurred from the start
Trembling the tears of an open heart
Gold beacon lit like heaven's mirth
Casting day away for another night
From worries to other misused spite

Pen falls and glass shatters to ground
Dog barks and the door begins to pound
How little a single cup shakes the night
Sound comes and goes as lightning does
But terror and tingling is caused as thus

Disturbed with life, no words live on
Poetry here, now crawling to dawn
Faraway flames search the sky
Out of water, creatures with crystal eyes
What God-sent secret lie in disguise

Fingers moving slowly from A to Z
As chalky thoughts begin to flee
"Dem Snee, dem Regen, dem Bergen"
Underneath pillow, the sleep of words
A string of passion from all the worlds

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  • 14 years ago

    by Timothy

    Not sure your style here, but you are very descriptive. Nice.

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    This was a delightful read. I find a few forced lines on some areas, whereas I enjoyed the fine imagery you created on this one. I loved how the 'subject', in the midst of turmoil and such-to, is still passionate with a God-given gift--Poetry. :) Nicely done, nonetheless. 5/5

    Marian

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    It was your great work .. you words shows the beauty. take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Taylor Lyn

    Great poem, you do well with the whole rhyming scheme! I like the basis and content of the poem as well, great work!

  • 16 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    That was very strong, with raw emotions. I really liked it.
    5/5