by LadyPearl May 12, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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Eyes weary and blurred from the start |
by Timothy
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Not sure your style here, but you are very descriptive. Nice. |
by Debbie
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This was a delightful read. I find a few forced lines on some areas, whereas I enjoyed the fine imagery you created on this one. I loved how the 'subject', in the midst of turmoil and such-to, is still passionate with a God-given gift--Poetry. :) Nicely done, nonetheless. 5/5 |
by Boy
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It was your great work .. you words shows the beauty. take care |
by Taylor Lyn
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Great poem, you do well with the whole rhyming scheme! I like the basis and content of the poem as well, great work! |
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That was very strong, with raw emotions. I really liked it. |