Patricia {Acrostic}

by Marc Ortiz   May 13, 2007


*This is for my friend*

Princess, angel from the divine heaven
Angelic beauty you have within you
True friendship you gave.. I shall treasure it
Rock my world with your beautiful kindness
Install your sweet love in my shattered heart
Confine me in your arms forever please..
Inside my heart you'll be there forever
Accept me please in your life my mistress.

*Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title.*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hatori

    Marc,
    This is so sweet that you made a poem for a friend of yours ^_^ Not only did you do that though, you made it truly beautiful. The words and description were great!! ^_^
    I have nothing to critisize, so keep it up!!! 5/5

    With all due respect,
    Hatori

    P.S. Thanks so much for the comment!!! ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    Cuteeeeeeeeeee =] Lol, I don't know why, but this line just made me laughxD ; "Rock my world with your beautiful kindness" I think because it's like, cute and silly at the same time. (The Rock part.. ) arghh I having a hard time explaining what I mean today xD anyway, nicely done again =]
    5/5
    <33

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    A gorgeous piece you have here, Really heart warming with a sweet dedication to someone you obviously care so much about. A great acrostic poem I found to be sweetly written. Well done 5/5~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    #2. This was quite a nice Acrostic. I know for certain that you know well how I adore this type of poetry form. =] In any case, I think certain lines need tightening-up, in order to augment the overall rhythm of this work.

    Nice one, nevertheless. =]

    Best wishes,
    Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by robin milford

    5/5 awesome poem well written Thanks for the comment on "Death's way"

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