You Don't Have To Call

by Tricky Daze   May 13, 2007


Just watching an old couple passing me by,
Their tightly bonded hands make me cry.
When I ask him if we will be like them someday,
He says 'You don't have to ask,I'll be with you till I die.'

Hearing the true words of my mum in my head,
You'll end up frustrated if you soon head him to bed.
When I tell him if something will happen someday,
He says 'You don't have to think,I'll be with you till I die.'

Going to my best friend's house for her birthday with gifts,
But I got confused when I saw her hesitating eyes.
When I tell her that I'll call her if there is anything that ties,
She says 'You don't have to call,It will be a secret till i die.'

Getting shocked when I see him naked after the doorbell,
Janitor tells us that he just jumped off from this floor.
When I tell them I can't understand it as I slam the door,
They say 'You don't have to understand,we'll be together till we die.'

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Nice poem..

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Great job on the poem, and wording was very good ,loved it , it was very sad but you did a great job on it. your friend Tracy ~5/5~

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    I loved this one..great style of writing....it was sad...yet well penned..Good write filled with emotion....kp it up!
    5/5
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Dear. Spaces after comma's!

    i die = I die

    I don't get this poem at all. It doesn't ... click with me dear. I think you need to work moreso on your portrayal rather than your vocabulary. Also, you have some horribly good examples of forced rhyme.

    I'll leave the vote out, you wouldn't be please.

    Sorry to be so critical.

    Sigh.

    ~Stephen White

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Hey..I love this poem..it rocks! **Sarah**