Every one is equal

by bleeding limegrenn   May 14, 2007


When I talk to people on line there so nice to me and humble
But when I meet them and they get to know me they are mean
Is it because I'm fat ,I'm stupid and ugly
I have just one question for those people
How do you live with your self make fun of other because you think that they aren't equal
If you where me for just one day maybe you would have a new vision of life
See thing as at a hole new level where every one is at an equal level,where no one should be picked on because there different
So maybe this will help you see through the fog
For if your the one that is being picked on you can relate

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Im sry you feel this way
    but plz dont put yourself down like that
    the poem was good
    the structure not so much

  • 16 years ago

    by Alex

    I agree with the other people, just work on your grammer, and it's great.

    ~*Alex*~

  • 16 years ago

    by BECLiKEW0AHH

    Excellent poem.
    What you were saying is brilliant. You're right, Everyone should be treated as an equal.

    There was a few grammer errors, but nothing too serious. Maybe you could improve it by maybe puting some rythmn or something in it.
    Anywho, imma give you 5/5 because i loved what you were saying!
    rebeccax

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    That was a great poem ,full of truth and lots of heart felt thoughts that run deep in your mind ,I can relate to you .I know how you feel .me I look for people with a heart, thats what make them not there looks, great job, your friend Tracy~5/5~

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well done! and yeah everyone is equal! keep writing! good job!

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