Thin Lines

This was wonderful.it was so sad and emotional.

A poet's tortured mind breaks
Loose paper soul's delight
Thin lines embracing heartache
As minutes splay the night

this was great.
best wishes
and take care

Very beautifully worded. Though the lines are short its having great meanings in it and are clearly expressed. I enjoyed all the lines in this piece.

With love
Fsams

Amazing poem, fantastic imagery here. really caught my eye, made me think.
well done :D

A little harder to read because it doesn't have many filler words (which may be the contest you did it for) but it was incredibly good with imagery and the such.
Charisma*

Excellent poem, very written and great piece if I must say so myself ,keep up the good work enjoyed reading your poems,~~~5/5 your friend Tracy