Echoes for peace (Rictameter)

by geeeeee   May 18, 2007


Echoes
of our chilling-
untuned voices singing
out for peace, we cannot obtain.
We Forever fail to hit a right note,
to unlock years of mysteries.
Secrets we yearn for lie
in our voices,
Echoes.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very interesting and excellently written poem. It is deep. Atmosphere that you created is superb. 5/5 Short but very powerful poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent write from you my friend, wonderfully written and a great choice of words, sad and so very true, you did a great job, a pleasure to read ,keep it up , your friend Tracy d 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Olivia

    Thanks for the comment.
    :]
    It really is sad how people are in this day in age. I would say our society and our time is one of the worst. All morals aside, it seems. I don't know...but I felt I definitely needed to voice my opinion on it.

    This is short, but says a lot at the same time.
    "We Forever fail to hit a right note"
    That is very true. Good write. :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    To wite different styles of poetry you have to be quite talented and from what i've read you are. This poem was chilling and an interesting read. Well done on a nicely penned poem. ~mel

    thankyou for the comment by the way =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Alma

    Well well
    what can I say
    awesome as always
    you know the world is so messed up and societies ideas about how we should act and what a teenager should be like and think are even more messed upits good that you use empathy and want to learn about what others feel and what they go through
    loved it!
    love you !