Dreams in Dark

by George   May 25, 2007


My heart it weeps
For times gone by
For future toils
And dreams condemned to die

I long and cry for something new
I reach and dream of me and you
To touch the sky, or feat as grand
Is nothing dear, with you at hand
But skies are dark as fear takes hold
For something in your heart is cold

Of me and you in dark I dreamed
As for a time did you it seemed
I thought that you would play my queen
Yet here we are, the end of scene

My head has learned the truth in this
That ignorance is truly bliss
For in my mind then I could see
And think of you, and more, with me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Wow.
    I loved this poem.
    It was amazing.
    Great flow, word choice, emotion, and all.
    Keep it uppp.

  • 16 years ago

    by fatal bliss is the best way to die

    I liked the ending its the best part even tho the whole thing was good i just realy liked the last part and its good keep it up ~melissaraye~

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Again, the rhyming in this is really, really good. I like the endings to your poems, they're very sweet. Nice job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Awwwwwwww such a sad writing. take care 5/5 and you have talent. i loved your poetry. that was my good experience.

  • 16 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    This also spoke very deeply of wanting of someone's affection yet being unable to attain it. This is my personal favorite line:

    That ignorance is truly bliss

    That is so true on so many levels. This poem is so jam packed full of emotions that it pours through, you did a very very good job with this. It speaks so longingly of her, yet the pain of rejection. Flow and everything like that is wonderful, including the rhyming. 5/5 for sure!!

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

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