Curse of Love

by George   Sep 23, 2007


Burning vision of his love,
a gift he thinks, from gods above.
She takes his gift, his only heart
And smiling tears his gift apart.
The tattered pieces scattered far
Creates not wound, but cursed scar.
His heart will never love again
The joy belongs to other men.
They have not tasted love so pure,
That leaves a pain which none can cure.

But truly this comes not from blue
This life was destined, as he knew.
To suffer, be his place in life
And never call a woman wife.
This curse to him be worse than death,
Than feeling last escaping breath.
The object of this man's desire,
The one thing that can light his fire,
To find his match and give her all,
A dream from which he must now fall.

The man is beaten, worn and hung
Condemned to live and die unsung
His dreams now dark and twisted are
Showing him his fall from far.
He feels as dreams all slip away,
The hoped for daughter gone this day.
And as he looks to future pain,
He knows he'll ne'er again be sane.
Her beauty haunts his sleeping mind
Release he seeks but will not find.
For as long as he will ever live
His heart he ne'er again can give.

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  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    VERY VERY GOOD! The only suggestion I have is to take out the word 'ever' in the second to last line. Other than that, it was breathtakingly beautiful with great wording. I'm enjoying your work a lot!
    *ME*

  • 16 years ago

    by The Herald

    Ditto on andrew, wtg man! check out my "dracula" lol, i think yours trumps mine ohhh lemme think 10:1 good enough? lol, DANG ITS GOOD! 11/10

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Good!

    for this one, its simple and the it flowed right. for the entire its very describe and the ideas were release freely on it..

    keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Fixxxer

    Man tah twas just beautiful. Your flow is incredible and feelings deep. definitely 5/5, keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    Its very difficult to work with a strict rhyming scheme, all too often people cram words in just to fit the flow, and you didnt need to do that even once, which is very hard to do, this is amazing work, keep it up