Shattered Mirror

by George   May 25, 2007


I dont know what I feel anymore

I am angry and resentful
I feel rage burn, consuming my soul

But then, I am hurt and confused
I realize I am alone

Then I think of you, and I am happy
I content myself with my place in your world

My life is like a shattered mirror...
I cannot see whats really me
I see the shards, but the whole eludes me

I need to fix this, but I cannot on my own
Will you be there?
Can you repair my shattered soul?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    well this one is much different from the other one that i did, the style is simple, the concept and every lines exerts powerful ideas..

    keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow I loved how the title wasn't exactly what the poem was about at first thought. I thought your vocabulary was amazingly awesome (if thats a word). I really enjoyed this piece.
    5/5
    kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    "I feel rage burn, consuming my soul " < take out burn and the comma. :/

    Other than that this was an amazing poem. The flow was a bit off, and I think it would have been better as one poem; just my preference. But, the emotion was amazing. Along with the word choices.
    Keep it up. :]

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    The words and emotions in this are great. The only thing I don't like is the somewhat all over the place structure. The lines in stanzas are inconsistent, which I don't like. Overall though, it was an enjoyable read.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. I don't know why it's rating is not a 5.0 I see nothing wrong with it. The word choice was great and the flow was very nice. I gave it a 5/5.

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