If I'm not alive tomorrow

by Anonymous Angel   May 26, 2007


If I'm not alive tomorrow

If the time has come,
for me to leave this place
Then I hope to become,
one with the space.

If that day is tomorrow,
please, don't hate me for it
Do express your sorrow,
but don't think its suicide I commit.

I love my life dearly,
live my life as if every day is the last
I don't plan on leaving early,
but life is going fast.

So if I'm not there the next day,
remember how I used to be
How we used to play,
and swim in the sea.

Remember the good things,
maybe we will meet again
You never know what time brings,
and when.

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written for a contest.

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I like this piece a lot, it is powerful, captivating and very effective. The flow is flawless in every part and whole poem is written greatly.
    Very original, too.
    Well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Well, I hope you won something for it. It's a really great poem. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Well, I hope you won something for it. It's a really great poem. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    What a beautiful poem that captures such an essential facet of life!

    The only thing I'd have to say threw me off a bit was the abrupt ending, but that is a judgment of creativity and it was still very good. Great work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    i got twist..whoah..its awesome, the impact to me is great..truly emotional..i love every lines so meaningful

    keep it up!

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