Hangin' Around

That could have a very diffrent message if you look at the way i did. Perfect, diffrent is good. I really like this the wording was great and the flow was great as well, the emtion was clear. you did an excellent job 5/5

Aw that was so short but sweet, a beautiful message, but simply said =] great use of words and imagery:
>Pain filled eyes
As I realize
I am all alone<
^ so much meaning! yet so simply sentenced!
great work, keep it up!
nuf luv xx

Although the poem was short the flow and imagery were done very well, I could picture the poem in my head as I read. Excellent job 5/5

It was a nice yet sad poem. I liked the detail that you put for the imagery. Great job

This is very sad. i really liked it.. I liked how the format of this is.

I think that this flowed throughout and it rhymed also..

This is short but you got your point across so thats good.. 5/5