Broken dreams

by isabel   May 28, 2007


Her thoughts aren't worth a dime
Pain is never healed by time
Suddenly, her world turned black

Locked away her broken dreams
Not so easy as it seems
Her soul shall never come back

Need to hide again her heart
Broken whispers in the dark
She'll be unable to speak

Broken dreams will make her leave
Too many, she will deceive
Love made her body too weak

Love breaks dreams, destroys the trust
Love is easily disguised with lust
She will say her last goodbye

Her true love was really lame
Too many are just the same
She may not survive a lie

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  • 16 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    I think the word 'lame' was a tad cliche but i still enjoyed the rest

    4.5

    thanks for the add!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelly

    Hey

    I like this poem, i think it is very well written -it gets across the pain and anguish.

    "She may not survive a lie"

    That line gave me goosebumps. Perfect ending to the poem. (5/5)

    Kelly
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    I agree - cool rhyme scheme. i like the rhythm too

  • 16 years ago

    by tyanna

    Wow..I really enjoyed this one. Every stanza was great!! I don't have any complaints with this one! Although it didn't really rhyme it was still amazing. I liked that you used three lines as opposed to four. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by bleeding limegrenn

    Wow iv never read such a emotional poem...anyways great great job

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