A Sign Of Hope

by Tammie   May 29, 2007


A blanket of dull and lifeless grey
Covering as far as I can see
From horizon to horizon
The only thing left to comfort me

With no friends left and the lovers gone
I walk alone under the drizzling rain
Dwelling over haunting past mistakes
Realizing these thoughts aren't worth the pain

All mistakes are made to learn from
Sometimes the lessons are tough
But life isn't meant to be easy
Trying to keep my head high when it's rough

As the rain begins to fall harder
I take it all in, enjoy the fresh smell
Let it cleanse my mind and soul in one
Washing away the agony from this hell

Looking up, suddenly appearing
A rainbow spread across the blank sky
Slowly, a smile widens on my face
I wonder, is this a sign, and why?

Curiously, I watch it emerge
A sign of good luck, or so they say
Another, faded rainbow above
Outstretched, but weakening away

Surely a sign of hope seeping through
Closing the cracks on my shattered heart
Soothing the seemingly ceaseless ache
Giving me the chance of a fresh start

Gradually, the clouds begin to clear
Revealing a sky of serene blue
My once complicated mind refreshed
The smile on my face finally true.

* Wasn't sure whether to put this in Nature or this category. Please correct me if I'm wrong. Thanks for reading. =] *

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    This is so lovely, Tammie.
    you have a wonderful imagination-and it shines through this amazing poem!
    take care x.o.x

  • 16 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Thats amazing the way things are imagined really shown the great flow n touch.
    5/5

    God bless u

  • 16 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    Amazing again! i really like your poetry, it seems to explain deeply which makes it so much better to read =) well done

    Keep writing!

    Love
    Jacs
    xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    It suited in this category to start as a comment and I'm sure everyoe feels this some days..feeling alone
    My fave lines should be;

    Gradually, the clouds begin to clear
    Revealing a sky of serene blue
    My once complicated mind refreshed
    The smile on my face finally true.

    It said a lot of things with just a four lines

    Well done
    Take care,
    Laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    It was okay.
    I mean, it could be better.
    You should add punctuation to your poems.
    It turns anything beautiful :P

    All in all,
    I loved that you were so discriptive.
    It's very hard to do.
    Your grammar was a bit off at points.
    Your spelling's great.
    Your flow seems a bit eccentric.
    But still, 5/5?