Lost You

by On Cupids Bad Side   May 30, 2007


When I look back over this past year
It's all I can do not to drop a single tear.
And I start to think about how we met
You didn't know either it'd come to this, I bet.
Cuz I sure didn't know it would be this way
Didn't know that I'd think about you every single day.
I didn't mean to hurt you the way that I did
When you told me how you felt, I just ran and hid.
You told me how much you loved and cared for me
We should be together - you tried to make me see.
But I threw your feelings back in your face
Said I didn't like you, though that wasn't the case.
And now you're hurt and your heart I can't mend
And I realized that I've lost my very best friend.

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  • 16 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Its pretty good but i think it should b more spaced out the in one big stanza and you should change the cuz because its not really propper unless u put it into the slang then its ok

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Again excellently written, only thing I could see that could improve this is to leave out the shorcuts like cuz they can really damage the flow of a poem, and they make it look unprofessional. it just looks and sounds better if it all spelled out, other than that the word choice was excellent, the flow was great, and the emtion was deep. 5/5

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