How i feel

by mike magyar   May 31, 2007


You say you don't want to talk me
You want me to go away
But you still want to be friends
I'm confused about what you said that day

I don't understand why you let this happen
Making me promise something like this
When everything was great
You threw away our bliss

How could you let the setting take control?
We both know we could make it work
Now matter how long life is
My love for you will lurk

When I cried, u said don't
How can I hold this in?
What u didn't see
Were the tears running down my chin

U also didn't see me
Punch the tree
And fall holding my heart
Because of loneliness and misery

But think of this, when something happens
And when the space between us increases
And when your heart becomes an unsolvable jigsaw puzzle
Who's gonna be there to fix the pieces?

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  • 16 years ago

    by StormXclusive

    THIS IS REALLY GOOD...I MOST DEFINATELY CAN RELATE TO THIS POEM...DEALING WITH A CONFUSED INDIVIDUAL THAT YOU LOVE IS ALSO HARDER FOR YOU...HOPE YOU FEEL BETTER.

  • 16 years ago

    by sheila

    Love it

  • 16 years ago

    by Domino0792

    I enjoyed this poem. A great read... Keep up the great writting.

  • 16 years ago

    by danielle

    Hey sorry been in that susitaion anyways it was good
    ~danielle~

  • 16 years ago

    by Alma

    I really liked it. It was sad. You showed a lot of true emotion. your last two lines finished it really well.
    beautiful poem 5/5