Smash it, Break it, Mutilate it.

by ASPHYXIATED   Jun 4, 2007


Why wait to be broken and ripped apart,
Why heal the scars on your broken heart,
When all life throws is another car crash,
Memories of a better time, rot in the trash.

Why perfect a life with no happy ending,
Why play out the fairytale, keep pretending,
When all you win is the courage to force a smile,
Treat life like a game, make it worth your while.

Why sit back and await your final vision,
Why give up now, go finish the mission,
Your the solider sweetie, your in demand,
No longer taking orders, your throwing out commands.

Smash it, Break it, Mutilate it.
Life is just a toy.

-Not my best-

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jake

    TIGHT!! lol that ruled

  • 16 years ago

    by MiSuNdErStOoD

    I like it alot it has a good point and i athink you did real good

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    Well, if this is not your best I don't know what to expect. Lol. I loved the title first off. It is absolutly amazing. The flow was smooth and not off at all and your ryhme was consistant. The only thing that really threw me off was the why, why, why. Lol. Just me though.

    My favorite lines were>>
    Smash it, Break it, Mutilate it.
    Life is just a toy

    An amazing write dear, great job!
    5.5

    Amber :]]

  • 16 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    I'm looking for someone with more questions than answers.
    And here we are, Lisa.
    Brilliant, and short write.

    I miss you.
    And your comments/late night msn talks.

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    I think it's amazing, not GREAT, Andrew.
    Gosh, the nerve of some people! Lol.
    I lovce you, darling.
    Take care of yourself!
    5/5
    -Heather

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