Behind her smile

by xo kisses xo   Jun 10, 2007


One little smile
Covered so many tears
No-one noticed
It was fake all these years

Hidden behind that smile
Was an agonizing past
Hittings and beating
And scars that will last

so much pain
That this girl held within
But this type of pain
Went deeper than skin

Hit after hit
Harder and harder each time
Bruises and scars
Such a painful crime

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  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow, it was so sad, yet beautifully written, i loved the way you portray the message to the reader with such a description, it paints a perfect picture. great work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mandy

    What can i say?? you are a great writer. ppl love you!! keep up the good work. see you soon. <333 ya! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Your style was good I liked it. Another simple yet effective piece of poetry you have written here which holds so much emotion which you portrayed nicely. A sad piece that was really touching. Keep up the good work~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    It's amazing how easily people hide behind fake smiles, even your best of friends could fool you with such happy behaviour. Excellent job once again, your a talented writer with great potential. 5/5 GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    Aw.
    That was sad, but beautifully written at the same time.
    5/5.

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