Jesus Christ Superstar,

by Espoirfailed   Jun 14, 2007


Jesus Christ Superstar,
It's not like he's promising miracles.
So pray to this blurred saviour,
But you're reasoning's not empirical.

And the girl who cries with that hungry babe
feeding upon her breast.
Yeah, she didn't listen to daddy's advice,
But I'm telling you, Jesus knows best.

"The Lord gives and the Lord takes away"
I'm laughing at the satire,
But not as much as He is laughing,
As rosemary beads become your mandatory attire.

So punish yourself something awful,
And repent for using your voice.
The crowd all notice the change in you,
But the congregation tells us it was your choice.

So put Him on that pedestal,
Though I don't know who you are.
You take his word indisputably,
Because he's Jesus Christ superstar.

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  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I loved this, sucks that I'm in the same contest against this one, lol. One thing I noticed was:

    "But I'm telling you Jesus knows best."
    ^^ put a comma after you it will make it flow better.

    "So punish yourself something awful,
    And repent for using your voice.
    The crowd all notice the change in you,
    But the congregation tells us it was your choice."

    ^^ I LOVED those lines, enough said. Lol.

    5.5
    :]
    <3

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