Stars (Acrostic)

by disturbed one   Jun 16, 2007


I guess this goes could do under Rekindled Love.
Its not really an acrostic, each letter is repeated 4 times but it still spells out Stars

Stars

Shining like the moon,
Surrounded by nothingness,
Silently waiting for tomorrows,
Silhouetted lies to unveil,

Threatened by the worlds uncertainty,
They retreat into their dark corner,
Telling each other the day will brighten soon;
Their troubles will be gone,

Another day goes by,
Another star shoots past,
Annihilating their chance of hope,
Absent mindedly fading away,

Reminiscing of better times,
Revealing their inner weakness,
Reminding me of you, I,
Realize why I even care,

Something about them,
Sparked in my mind,
Simple thoughts run through my head,
Someday you will be my shooting star

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  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    Nice new poetry technequie keep up the good work and i'd love to read more
    5
    :~)Sam

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Aweh, I loved this. It really pulled me in and the ending was a perfect way to end the poem. I`ve never read a lot of your stuff before but I am enjoying it. :]

    5.5
    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I find it really sweet xD it's a good symbol for love xD 'stars' Well done. Flow was good, I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessie

    Omfgg !!
    This is such an amazing poem !!
    It's really goooddd.
    This was my favourite line:
    Someday you will be my shooting star.