Reflections [Pleiades]

by Tammie   Jun 16, 2007


Restrained focus denies
Recognising broken,
Ruined images of
Reality. Then swift
Realisation that
Reflections never lie.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lover Boii

    I love the word choice, to start all the lines with R's and have them run thoroughly. Good job.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by regina

    I had to read it twice to really understand, but when i got it i loved it!

  • 18 years ago

    by David

    Nice technique, the words you used were well chosen. and the meaning behind it was very thoughtful. if i actually know exactly wat it is...

    5/5 David

  • 18 years ago

    by Boy

    Very intresting... nicely coverd and nicely done.. love your poem
    i am giving you 5/5

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