Hand and Hand with Guilt and Passion.

by Cherise   Jun 19, 2007


I stumbled down the street
and I met a man
who was holding something
in both of his hands.
"Guilt" in his left
and "passion" in his right.

I asked him why he would carry such things
For those two together,
create the most terrible offspring's
He said that all his life
those were the only things he had,
they are the things that leave him feeling so bad.

I told him "hey man, stop feeling so down"
But by then he was making his way
to the other end of town.
by the time i got home, thinking about the man,
I found that i had
"Guilt" and "passion"
in my left and right hand.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    Another great poem i love this one too...my fave part is when you said you found out that you had
    "Guilt" and "passion"
    in my left and right hand.that was awesome!! great work!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Beautiful ending!

    It really caught me by surprise and finished the poem off well. Each write I have read from you, is different in every way which makes it refreshing and a joy to read.

    Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I loved this poem so much

    i mean the ending was unexpected
    but it fit in there

    very nice job

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Ouu very nice, i like the idea of this. The ending was a good surprise twist:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittini

    I liked can't say anything needs to be changed or relooked at.... i makes me think alot i don't know why but it just does. really good feel to it and flow 5/5

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