another amazingly beautiful poem!
i could really relate to this... i felt the sadness she felt... i knew what she was going through, why she was doing what she was.
the flow and rhymes were perfect (as always)
the is definately goin into my faves
A different piece from you too me I found this to be a different style you have taken up from you other recent poems and I really loved it. The two line stanzas were really effective in the two lines you held so much beautifully sad emotions. Again Bryan a piece of amazement viewed in my eyes. Well done ~mel